I thought it was gonna be lithium.
first 3 chords are in same rythym as Lithium By Nirvana.
If the lyrics were inproved slightly this would be an amazing song. A full band version of it would also add another dynamic.
yeah i got the idea by playing lithium ,but i hit the wrong chord and built up on that realy
ive got alot of song where i improvise the lyrics but i always suck and end up talking $#!t so i wrote some lyrics
they are kinda improvised cos they were the first thing that popped into my head as i wrote them
and yeah i probably will do a full band version when i got my electriv fixed
thanks for the review :)
crap just relized that u said improve not iprovise oh wel
its just they were based on true things
verses sound like dumb
The verse melody sounds like "Dumb" by Nirvana.
other than that this song has potenital
yeah most of my songs are nirvana influenced but thiss song was writen ages ago when everything i did was nirvana influenced most of my stuff now is eerrrmm to be honest i dont even know whaat my music now is influenced by but there is a sense of nirvana in it
This is amazing. Feels very gameshowish.
thanx man, like to hear from you again
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